I've applied all the recommendations from last week's critique. I have changed the red text to a warm orange hue instead. I have added the first few lines for the topic in the Schedule section. I have also reduced the spacing on the footer. Following the same principles for the two other break points helped in maintaining consistency.
Some feedback I received from today's critique are:
- Brightening up the text to an orange hue really helped solve the contrast issue from last week.
- Creating a one level up hierarchy for the schedule text (e.g., morning coffee, lunch, etc.) so it's noticeably larger/different than the body copy.
- Extending the column width a tiny tiny bit.
And so these are what I will be working on. *and more*